Good writing...
The piece itself is very good. I would suggest giving it a little more dynamic. The eq on the mixing isn't a huge deal, I know how it is recording from an electronic keyboard. This a very emotional sounding piece. I think it could really have a powerful impact if it were played with the emotion that you can hear in the music...
Nice flow...
I like the creativity used with rhythm here...
Thank you.
Standard rhythms aren't nearly as fun as experimental ones. Maybe not necessarily to listen to though.
Wendy Carlos?
I love the style. Keep it up. Has a "Well Tempered Synthesizer" feel...
Carries a story...
Your writing style is very vivid in presenting a musical story. I like it a lot. My only question is what happened in the end? You didn't leave me suspended, but I don't feel fully resolved. If that's your intent then I it seems to be one of those intriguing endings you have to think about.
thank you very much! its funny, when i wrote it i wasn't thinking about carrying a story at all, i was just stringing together as lot of ideas, but when i revisited it yesterday (which was like two years after i wrote it) i thought it had a kind of storyline too... which is why i played it how i did, and why i gave it the weirdo title!
i kind of see what you mean with the end. i guess i was trying to make it quitely come full circle rather than give it a grand finale, but it may have been more satisfying if i raised the volume on the last couple of chords...
thanks for the feedback!
Really delivers the scene...
I didn't even need your description there to get the idea. I like that, you really captured it. One thing I get from this is that those rays that break through the clouds seem to completely overpower the storm, and it isn't until the end that one even remembers that there are clouds there.
Thats great! :) glad it comes across ^^ thank you!
Good song...
I think the length is perfect to give the song just the right flow of complexity. It has that dark imaginative ambiance instead of an outright scary one. I like that a lot. When I heard it I immediately thought of this NIN instrumental song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hSO_GP IF3Xg I think the flow is very similar. Don't take that as a bad thing, I think certain types of ambiance have rhythms and chords that are natural to them. Good job!
Thanks. =P
Nice calm ambience...
It could use a melodic line but other than that it's pretty good!
I'm a classically trained pianist and composer that also enjoys using modern music technology. My music is usually played on keyboard (I use a Kawai Stage Piano) and edited in Reason. It's all about making the music sound exactly as imagined...
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